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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I like how the lineart is lighter and darker in some areas, it has a nice glowing effect. I also like how the swirls on his arm and tail are nice and smooth
Now for antomy things, I'm not going to point out ALL of them cause I know you're not going for realistic x'D The paws look kinda strange, like he's standing on the tips of his toes. Try making the feet get "rounder" at the bottom, so it looks like he's on his paw pads instead of his toes c; His hip/stomach looks really skinny, like he's starving :'D
I can't really tell whether he's a fox or a cat...The ears look cat, but the muzzle looks like abit of both.
For shading, try blending with the Water tool instead of Blur. Blur makes things look fuzzy and wierd, Water makes it more "paint like". Fire casts alot of light on things, so turn up the opacity on your lighting and make it blue instead of white/very light blue.
The background looks really cool! I especially like those little "whisps" of fire coming out of the main part. They look like shiny feathers
I'm not sure weather he's supposed to be standing in the fire or infront of it...If you wanted him in the fire, put some fire infront of him too.
Overall this is a really nice peace <3 At first glance it's really pretty, you don't get to notice the mistakes until you look closley c: Sorry if you couln't understand what I meant in some parts otl, hope this helped anyway!
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